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Bitter Frost (Bitter Frost Series: Book 1)

Bitter Frost - Kailin Gow meh. So, this book just ENDS at 196 pages. Actually it says "Breena, Kian and Logan's story continues in Book 2". No character building, and then no climax? And then like a 40 page excerpt from a totally unrelated book is included? What book does that?Not to be nitpicky, but I found the sentence structure to be a little annoying as well. Lots of -- in sentences as well as a third ". I don't know if it was intentional or missed by the proof people but there are also several "double space" and even "triple space" in some spots making the print very blocky.The story is a good story idea, I just don't feel it is executed well in this book. The book would be good for maybe a 6th or 7th grader (*there is kissing, but I think it's ok for that age range.*)I don't know, maybe I'm just bitchy today, but I expected more.